Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 1, 2020
The Lonely Kiwi
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Good story, I like the happy ending.
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ReplyDeleteHi Selah
ReplyDeleteGreat to read some of your creative writing. I am also pleased that there was a happy ending for the kiwi. I wonder what happened to the cat? Did he find something else to chase after?
thank you
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