Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, April 23, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Selah,
ReplyDeleteGreat slide show on how Torty came to New Zealand. I enjoyed reading the Journal story about her and her life. It was quite adventurous wasn't it?
To make it more your own work, it might have been nice to see you create your own pictures by drawing, or using google images or apps rather than just a screen shot of the book, but I can see you still put in some thought and effort to create this. Keep up the good work.
Hi Selah,
ReplyDeleteYou have created a good slide show that shows his adventures in New Zealand. Next time, I would like to see you create the pictures using google drawings. Remember to add what your task was and what goal you were working on so that people now why you were doing this task. Keep up the good work.